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Whispers From The Heart
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Whispers From The Heart |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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As we write our heart to you, please handle it with care With feelings coming out, sometimes so hard to bear You may not understand, what we have to say If you will but listen, we will talk to you today At times we write of joy, when it is overflowing Coming from inside, with our faces all glowing Then there are the times, we feel our hearts will break At those times we pray, you show compassion for our sake Sometimes past experiences, about we love to tell Our memories in our hearts, the ones we love so well Then there are those times, we hear loves whisper in the night So we feel inspiration from, the moon and stars to write Most of us have found of, our Darlings to write, we love Telling you of the one, God has sent from up above Many loving experiences of, which we attempt to tell When coming from our hearts, you feel the love as well Some write with expertise, others just made a start All poetry is enjoyed, when written from the heart So when we read poetry, let us try to look inside We are seeing someone's heart, where deep feelings reside |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This is just fantasic writing bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So true, Ethel!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How beautiful sweet Ethel! A lot of love held in this piece. Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
beautiful and true thanks for sharing this |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks Bernie and Martie!!  I really appreciate you both reading and replying. Huggers, Ethel  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nancy and Sharksbean...I didn't see ya'll there. Thanks to both of you for your sweet comments. I appreciate ya'll. Hugs, Ethel  |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
More than beautiful ... and so very YOU! Inspiring in many ways!! CT |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you so much, Craig. That's a very sweet reply and I appreciate it very much. Hugs, Ethel  |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
Ethel, What a fantastic write, expresses emotion that is so true in poems and it does all depend on the kind of poem there is. Its nice to have a good poet such as yourself, thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Truth and beauty. Eric |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
garysgirl I appreciate your insight into the courage it takes to put our hearts on display. With legs trembling like a new born colt. Those first steps in their innocence are no less lovely than the polished and flowing words of the masters. When those words come from our hearts. Thank you, Beautiful poem. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Only a poet could understand the elaborate necessities of expression, no matter how clear or unclear...hugs YOU! This is a painting from your wondrous heart. Thank you |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, all my dear poet friends!! I knew you would all understand. Yes, Steve, we do absolutely put our hearts on display whenever we share our poetry with others. I agree that even the newbies to poetry writing write beautiful poetry whenever it's written from the heart. Thanks everyone, again, for reading and commenting on my poems. Hugs to you all, Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Expressed to eloquently, Ethel....all so true! ....jo |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sounds like you are describing me, here. This is beautifully written, Ethel. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Ilianna and Sue. I appreciate both of you reading and replying to my poem. Heart Hugs to you both. Hugs, Ethel  |
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