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Eden's Divorce
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Eden's Divorce |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Eden’s Divorce It is our time of Eden’s loss The apple turned to applesauce And fear has changed the valleys deem From clear of brook to muddy steam No more is there tranquility But crashing waves futility Argosies of prime and grime Cavorting on quick silvers time A sea of everlasting seem Pathways of unending dream Crashing circles of unveil A child with shovel, sand and pail We chaste upon the grime of time A people’s pie with baste of lime A pie full of humanity To serve it to eternity This pie will also turn to sauce And once again we will divorce |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this is a sad poem. thankyou for sharing. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "In the Circle of Life It's the wheel of fortune It's the leap of faith It's the band of hope Till we find our place On the path unwinding In the Circle, the Circle of Life" From, The Circle of Life, The Lion King. Thanks for reminding me with your words, of this beautiful song. A very thought-filled poem!  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
We chaste upon the grime of time A people’s pie with baste of lime A pie full of humanity To serve it to eternity This pie will also turn to sauce And once again we will divorce Seymour, this is a very thought provoking poem..... and that's a good thing. Thanks you, Sir. Hugs, Ethel  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"It is our time of Eden’s loss The apple turned to applesauce" ~ But as our dues are duly paid Tart lemons become lemonade Would you care to have some applesauce with me? ~ and wash it down with some sweet lemonade?  Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharksbean, Thank you for the read and comment Martie Thank you sweety.  Ethel Thank you dear.  Earth Angel It would be my pleasure. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I like the way Linda turned things around with your poem....I'd like some lemonade, too, please...lol. It seems like the cycles are always there, but perhaps we can get a little closer next time if we remember "fear is the mind killer". ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana I enjoyed her comment too. Thanks for the read and reply. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this is very good and thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Angelheart Thank you so much for the read and reply. |
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