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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-09-27 01:56 AM



Towards Attractions Of Desire

Whenever my mind wanders
To all those places far away
Just leave me there awhile
I shall decide how long I stay

As I journeyed in wanderlust
Going from mundane reality
Passionate thoughts travel
Whilst upon flights of fantasy

Towards attractions of desire
As always swept of my feet
Soft white sand is awaiting
The shore on which we meet

Waves wash across the sand
We lay down beside the sea
Making love upon the beach
Passions immersed in ecstasy

Hope ©2005

Link to poem with music and graphic below
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/93/poem_780460.html

© Copyright 2005 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2005-09-27 02:05 AM


Very lovely and passionate write, HopeS.   ....jo
StevenS
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2 posted 2005-09-27 07:11 AM


Hope, Thunder from down under! I'm a little swept myself! Very,very,very beautiful!
Margherita
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3 posted 2005-09-27 07:19 AM


Sounds attractively romantic, dear Hope!

Lovely!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-09-27 07:50 AM


Whenever my mind wanders
To all those places far away
Just leave me there awhile
I shall decide how long I stay

stay as long as need be, nice place to be...

don't ya hate it when someone says, you shouldn't feel that way, or you can't feel that way?  

Hugs to ya Hope, good to see you

Paul Wilson
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5 posted 2005-09-27 07:20 PM


Hope...You have painted a tender love story with these words from your heart. Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

garysgirl
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6 posted 2005-09-27 07:55 PM


Very romantic and beautiful, Hope.
You know I loved it.
Hugs,
Ethel

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2005-09-28 06:31 AM


always hopeful~~


M

SmartChick
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8 posted 2005-09-28 05:36 PM


Wow!
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2005-09-30 12:35 PM


Nice...James
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