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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2005-09-27 01:48 AM


An opening of a romantic book
first on the bookshelf
an ink blotter
flutters
butterfies in liquid blue
doesn't make sense

a second look
words on a page
fall
need to focus
away from hunger at noon
love waking afternoon


third look
study in desperation
wonder if he'll look at her
she says projecting a sexy look
over an opened romantic book...


opened chapter of love content
opened for review
need to focus
distractions of caressed anatomies
he is so occupied in the kiss
in study places
she wanted to be on his calling list
outside the chapter love was missed.


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (09-27-2005 10:19 AM).]

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2005-09-27 02:07 AM


Very entertaining scene, Martin...took me into it.   ....jo
Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
2 posted 2005-09-27 03:13 AM


"she wanted to be on the calling list
outside the chapter love was missed"

Enjoyed the read and loved the above lines!

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
3 posted 2005-09-28 12:04 PM


lrt mr entertain then with a poetic slant on strangely set romantic moments ...


peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
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4 posted 2005-10-19 03:59 AM


And so the game continues...

What fun!!!

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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