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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-09-27 12:35 PM


Yes you have probably seen this before, but with a bit of luck, I am off to Sunny Wigan for 6 months on a project and it just felt like I wanted to depart with these words

Bodger

To touch a moment’s light illuminating from a feather that fell in one glorious moment

Seeking breath to fly winds fluttering on a breeze on a thought that danced with thoughts and dreams

In your soul on a moonlit night would your eyes frighten a candle your thoughts espoused in the light of a dark night

Are you the one glorifying the evening to die for your words lighting the day

Would you be sad at this moment of truth and courage, to dream crescents of gentle images surrounding a world fractionally at peace

Would you move your array of blinding essence of today's thoughts, last night's passion to dismissal of fragments of bliss

Would you desire a bright sun seeking fragrance enveloped by music and percussion of restless breaths and ideas to warm a feeling of earth sacrifice within a feeling

Would you echo streams of living and dying fire burning hot in a strange cauldron as you watch a child blazing arise from the cauldron

Throwing essence across a sun dressed in a visage of a world you never knew as you fear understanding more than fear


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2005-09-27 07:09 AM


Wishing you luck for your sojourn in sunny Wigan!

A beautiful write, full of light and warmth, making fear less fearful!

Love,
Margherita

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-09-27 07:53 AM


a very thought provoking read...enjoy your trip....many good thoughts sent along with you
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

3 posted 2005-09-27 07:14 PM


Thanks for the great read before your depature.

Best of luck!

Eric

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