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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Just a word Before I go Though It illuminated not, But at least It lets you know You Haven’t been forgot. As I drift Beyond this realm, And leave so much behind I anchor Not to the helm And guide beyond the mind. Just a glance Looking back Till I’m out of sight I slip away Into the black Fading into the night. Gloom |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very mysterious, thanks for sharing.  Poetry can get you very far |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is quite sad to me Professor. I do hope that everything is okay in your little part of the world. Always left pondering your writings. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This fits well with a word of lost... either that, or the fact that one cannot regain what was forbidden... either way, a very poignant write, Sir. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you Angelheart, Not that much of a mystery, Just don’t put too much on the realm change For what is a realm Perhaps just another land of dreams? Thank you, Nightshade Pleased you enjoyed As for my little part of the world About the same as always, Which might be not so good for most But I’ve grown used to it. Thank you, Sunshine Always what has gone is lost Till we can swim back through the currents of time Your support is always a aid to me Gloom |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
If melanchology could be considered beautiful, then, Gandolf the Grey, I think this is. Just don't "go" too far.  ....jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I understand, dear Professor Gloom ... I know of this drifting, but I am also aware that LIGHT is never far and I am always guided back into its Path ... wishing you the same! You are a beautiful Poet! Love, Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the night drifter...awakens or should awaken hords of blessings which we are given.... Hugs to you |
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Obsidian Snow Member
since 2005-08-24
Posts 88 |
The need to drift is so inviting, as if a ritual of cleansing each time. Yet your words show a small bit of regret for what is left. Well done. |
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