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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-09-26 12:39 PM


Bubbles

One day I mixed soapy water
Used it as a bubbles mortar
Passing them into the air
That caught the rainbow in its flair

I passed the moment like a child
It made me smile and I was wild
They seemed to dance upon the breeze
Some would break and some would tease

Some would rise and some would fall
And some would make me shout and call
And I was lost eternity
Polarity of parity

A place of neither here nor there
A place of image one could stare
A place where one could heave a sigh
A place where one could stay and die

Lost within a world of joy
A fairy land of child’s employ



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Martie
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1 posted 2005-09-26 12:52 PM


Sy

If you can still love bubbles,  you'll be enjoying for a long time yet!!  

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-09-26 01:26 PM


send me your address, my grand daughter would love doing bubbles with you....

wonderful write Sy...(sigh)

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3 posted 2005-09-26 01:47 PM


great write sy
bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

iliana
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4 posted 2005-09-26 02:01 PM


Well, Sy, what can I say.....you've said it all!  And, so very cleverly...you've captured the clean soul and childlike innocence necessary for rainbow endings....all in one sweet write!   Much enjoyed.   ....jo
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5 posted 2005-09-26 03:07 PM


Afternoon Sy!
I hope the child in you lives on forever!
If we lived closer I would come and blow bubbles with you...
and bring my own too!
Hugs & Luv for this smile maker.

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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6 posted 2005-09-26 03:15 PM



Your inner child is alive and well!

~ May you forever be blowing bubbles! (and I don't mean in the bathtub!)
Bubble Bath  Flirty


EA
Bubbles

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-09-27 05:32 PM


Martie
I'll always enjoy bubbles, thank you.

LeeJ
Thank you sweety.

And thank you bernie.

iliana
Always a pleasure to read your comments

Nancy,
Who knows maybe some day.

Earth Angel
Shoot you are jest too cute.

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