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The Fate to hate
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The Fate to hate |
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xFromtheHeartx Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80Florida U.S. |
"The Fate to hate" As i look into the nights sky I can see my life passing by With each and every mistake That handed me a horrible fate I remember when I would give it all away Just to hear her say "I love you" Each and every day Everything was well Until i fell Out of her heart And she said it was right This is our last night My heart broke in two that day When the one i loved so much Walked away I miss her every single day Now, as i look into the nights sky I have seen my life pass by With each and every mistake That handed me a fate That i cant help but hate |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, if only we were perfect, then perhaps our lives would be... But I am a firm believer in "Live and learn". Hopefully we learn from our mistakes and never repeat them. But, alas, to err is human! You made me feel what you were feeling ~ and that is what poets do!  ~ May love and joy return to your life. Love & Light, EA |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
Man I could feel the pain. It sucks to lose ones you love. I know!!! Keep up the good poetry!!! Poetry is beauty in words. |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
I did this twice on accident. Sorry dude!!! Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
yes it it is sad to lose the person that you love. and I hope that you find love again. and then u can be happy and start a-new. thanks for the write, I really did like it.  Poetry can get you very far |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Fate can be cruel .... and in that one instance sooo cool! We just need to be ready for it, bro ... CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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