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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-09-25 09:14 PM



thought you could save
you from yourself
in your doubt of
rigious ways they
just drive you insane

the lies you draw upon
so much you begin to make
them true in your demented
twisted mind.

in time you will see you were
the one that isn't worth saving
but it was me.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2005 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
1 posted 2005-09-25 10:07 PM


very thoughtful.. thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-09-25 10:33 PM


"in time you will see you were
the one that isn't worth saving
but it was me."

Exactly sweetie...
keep on writing!
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
3 posted 2005-09-26 01:55 AM


As much as we may not want to, we have to put ourselves first... becuase only we know what makes us happy!

Great write!

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2005-09-26 03:32 AM


I don't really know - maybe the world is telling us to save others as a means of saving ourselves.  But, enjoyed your thoughts here.
Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
5 posted 2005-09-27 12:17 PM


Nothing like a good tongue in and twisting

At least it seems to be bloodless

Like the words

Bodger

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
6 posted 2005-09-27 01:33 AM


thank you!

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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