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Abe
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0 posted 2005-09-25 04:35 PM



A MUSIC CITY TRILOGY

GOIN’ TO THE OPRY

Goin’ up to Nashville town
Try to sell a song or two
‘Cause I’ve finally found something
That, I really want to do.

I’ve been waiting a few years
And feel that my time has come
If I can’t get any breaks
Then, I guess I’ll make me some.

I have met a bunch of stars
Who said, they would take a look
Read my typewritten sheets
And the pages of my book.

I know they must be busy
But, wish they’d take the time
For I’m sure, that they could
Make songs of my words of rhyme.

I suppose most of them don’t care
‘Cause they’ve already made theirs
Have forgotten what it feels like
At the bottom of the stairs.

I haven’t spent, as much time
As a lot did, breaking in
But, I started kinda late
Don’t have all those years, to win.

So, I’m going to the city
Where country music’s king
To find someone to read my words
To find someone, to sing.

The early 80s


THE MUSIC ROW BLUES

Got to shake this lowdown mood
Of these ol’ Music Row blues
I’ve got blisters on my feet
And the soles worn off my shoes.

My voice hoarse, about give out
And my knuckles’re red and sore
My ears, so tired of hearing,
“We’re not taking any more!”

I start with the big houses
Now, I search each darkened hall
Eyes strain to read the nameplates
Figger that I’ll hit ‘em all.

I talk to other “artists”
Who chose this hard way of life
Some have been around for years
Some, gave up their kids and wife.

We all think, “I will make it!”
And we must believe it true
But the sad, hard fact remains
There’s so very few, who ever do.

Some take their words and music
To their cold grave in the end
Still hoping fame and fortune
Is just waitin’ ‘round the bend.

To make it in “the business”
Sometimes, it costs your soul
When you lose, might win that game
Played on Nashville’s Music Row.

The late 80s


MUSIC CITY FRIENDS

Seems I’ve got a million friends
But, not one I could call
To ask, to help, to hold me up
When I feel I’m ‘bout to fall.

I’ve held my heart and soul out
Tried to be what a friend should be
But, everyone is so suspect
Here, in this Music City.

Nobody trusts another
Especially, if you have a need
Everybody wants to, “Screw ‘em all!”
But who planted that seed?

I think it’s the ones who have “it”
Who think they have some “class”
But they're the ones with nothing
Who let their true friends pass.

Don’t you ever ask a favor
Or let them know you really care
For to find “real” people in this town
Is really kind of rare.

Don’t be sincere and honest
Don’t say what you really mean
‘Cause all of those “high rollers”
Will put what “they” want, between.

I thought I‘d found one friend
Said, I’d be there, always
But trying to be a nice guy
Is not something, that pays.

I don’t need fame and fortune
I don’t need to be the best
All I really need is friendship
To pass, the Music City test.

I guess I’ll have to give it up
There’s no reason more, for trying
Because here in Music City
All that works, is a good lying.

1995


Del "Abe" Jones
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Margherita
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1 posted 2005-09-25 06:01 PM


A very well written piece, dear Abe, even though rather cynical. But then you are right, the world of artists is mainly hardship, only a few become glories ...

The ponderings about friendship are very sad, yet there is truth in your statements. Sigh!

Love,
Margherita


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2 posted 2005-09-25 06:06 PM


Abe~
LOVE THEM !!!
I'll be back to read again~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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