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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-09-25 05:21 AM

If Words Paint The Picture

Could you picture me
With thoughts on my mind
As I look for answers
That I cannot seem to find

A picture of lonesome
With sadness on my face
One with smiles gone
That only you can replace

With sorrow in my eyes
As I had searched in vain
The tears I have wept
My arms nursing the pain

If words paint the picture
The longing you can view
It should become clear
I have felt lost without you

Hope ©2005
Link to poem with music and graphic below
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/93/poem_780128.html

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2005-09-25 05:39 AM

Deeply melancholic, dear Hope. And so many broken hearts will relate to your words.
It's a beautiful poem.

... still I have to add that your heart is able to love again, just open the heart-door a little bit ...

Love and hugs.
Margherita

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2005-09-25 07:53 AM

Thank you Margherita for your caring reply ....
Yes my heart is always open wide with lots of love to share , yet the users arrive , hence my hearts wear and tear and feelings of despair

Hope

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

3 posted 2005-09-25 10:44 AM

Don't give up Hope. There's some broken hearted old Knight polishing up his armor as we speak. With the hope of finding his damsel in distress. Dry your eyes and go to where you think he will be searching. The angels will rejoice when you find each other. And so will we. :-)

Although the world is full of suffering , it is also full of the over coming of it. Helen Keller

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2005-09-25 12:07 PM

Cheer up Hope. With your gentle spirit, you are bound to find the right someone to shed your lonliness. For now...you have us!

hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

5 posted 2005-09-25 12:30 PM

I am not going to even try and refraise what they said exept the fact that you do have us and you do have the gift of writing such heart warming poetry. thanks for sharing dear hope,

thats a good name for ya

because that is what you can have in times like this..

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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