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One more Day
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One more Day |
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xFromtheHeartx Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80Florida U.S. |
One more day We wont stay Together one more day Cause the love we had in the past Seemed like it would never last I never knew What i saw in you Each in every day That made me want to stay Just one more day To make it last Just a lil more then in the past Just one more day In one more day Ill be able to say Good-bye to you Cause you always knew It would never last For the lies that you always cast Drove us apart And this time there is no chance to restart Good-byes are Good-byes Now you see how the time flies When your castin the lies That lead to our love's demise So we wont stay Together one more day Cause i never knew What i saw in you Cause now i see How you treated me This is how it has to be |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
xFromtheHeartx, this was a great write from the heart, I could feel your pain of what had to be. Thank you for sharing. Sincerely Rick |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A good write and a lesson that many will learn in their lifetime. If we only knew then right? |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
xFromtheHeartx this was a very good write and thankyou for this  |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this is a very sad but very good. thanks for sharing..... Poetry can get you very far -Laura |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Casey~ A net of lies catches nothing ... holds nothing~ 'Tis better that one slips through and finds truer waters to swim~ Poignant penning, poetess~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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