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xFromtheHeartx Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80Florida U.S. |
Sin In the darkness of shadows My heart has become shallow Thinking what could have been If i had not comitted that sin Never again Will i be able to see him As i walk through the halls I see the eyes never fall Far from me Why does it have to be That i have these thoughts Of guilt and dispair This isnt fair The time i have to do Will not be carried through For the ultimite price will be paid Cause im not affraid To say this is my end I will soon be with my friend In the darkest of shadows I've been feeling so shallow Thoughts of what could have been If it wasnt for that sin That gave him his end My friend I shall see you again |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
Welcome Hatchling LOL : To Passion In Poetry!!! This was a good First Post.. Look Forward to Reading more.. Thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Welcome to Passion's .... hope this is one of at least 7 exceptional writes!! Look forward to more! CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
even in the deepest darkness there is light and that light is hope |
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Kevin1999 Junior Member
since 2005-05-10
Posts 14WV |
Nice write. Welcome to Passions. |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
This was really good. I could feel the sadness. Keep up the good poetry Casey!!! Poetry is beauty in words. |
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