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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-09-24 08:43 PM




I have a Lawn Mower
to cut grass
what a sight to show class

The things that I like about mowing
you learn how to cut in straight lines
you try not to breaks any sort of vines

keep the blade in the grass
don't let the Lawn Mover run over your azz
you can get seriously hurt if your not careful
the Lawn Mower is breakable

You work up a sweat
I will tell you that
sometimes it is not easily done
you just have to deal with things
at the tip of your thumb

I feel like i want to sleep
when I am done with this kind of work
then when my dad makes me do more
I want to go buzzerk

It is a simple job
once you get used to it
you just have to know how to do it

The Lawn mower in the picture is an ideal
of a Lawn
Something from Sears
There you are my Peers!!

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

© Copyright 2005 Laura - All Rights Reserved
xFromtheHeartx
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since 2005-09-24
Posts 80
Florida U.S.
1 posted 2005-09-24 08:59 PM


lmao, i like this poem Laura lol


sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
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2 posted 2005-09-24 10:30 PM


LMAO This is good and funny one.

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

Margherita
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3 posted 2005-09-25 06:05 AM


What a lovely new picture, dear Angelheart!

Lawns are beautiful ... in my opinion, well .... hhmmmm sorry, but I don't know why .... I feel like growing grass and I'd like to be free to grow ...

but the rule seems to be another, as you well know.

Love,
Margherita

Sharksbean
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jax
4 posted 2005-09-25 04:25 PM


hey Laura i liked that poem about the lawn mower it was funny


StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
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L. A. (Lower Alabama)
5 posted 2005-09-25 04:47 PM


You never fail to make me smile. Thank you Angel Heart, I needed that.
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6 posted 2005-09-25 05:28 PM


AngelHeart, this is adorable. I'm smiling
and that's a good thing. )
Hugs,
Ethel

Goldenrose
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7 posted 2005-09-26 01:06 PM


Enjoyed this because even though you made it sound interesting ...you used a thin veiled disguise to show how much you realy dislike it..kind of reverse phsycology...does your dad read this sight now?...if he does...your plan has probably worked and he has got the message...well done..thank you for your words..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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