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River Waltz - Duet with Nightshade
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River Waltz - Duet with Nightshade |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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 Sweet, gentle fae in your bower, Please join our dance at midnight hour. Sing your songs of mystic praise And spirits join as voices raise.  Gentle spirit of the moon Allow not morning to be soon. For we have dances to attend Above a star-filled river bend. Where castles puncture through the clouds, And fairies keep the gremlins out. Where mingled kisses start and end Above a star-filled river bend. We'll waltz upon a bed of moss In gowns of lace with pearls emboss, Our partners eyes hypnotic be And lead us under willow tree. Their magic kisses cast a spell That even daylight cannot quell. River breezes cool perfumed air As moonbeams ripple through our hair. Boat of sail heralds our depart Midsummer's eve locked in our hearts. Yes, fairy dances we did attend Above a star-filled river bend. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Awwww, that was soooo b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l. It was magical! ~ and a  A wondrous reading experience!  Nancy and Chris, I commend you on a brilliant collaboration!  Linda |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetEnchantedOne and Chris~ Ah, one believer of the fae is smiling here~ LOVELY .. just lovely, ladies~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
dancing on air..........over here..thanks gals  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Two favorites...one enchanting write Nicely done ladies. TD |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
a fantastic duet! .... has my mind spinning! CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
just terrific - you two write special wonderful poetry - thanks - Paul |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for the sprinkling of fairy dust, and for sharing the magic you wrote so well. Hugs Ladies~ |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a true delight to read.....hugsss you two.... |
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Waterfall27 Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 98Ontario , Canada |
wonderful poetry |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou everyone. This was a joy to write with my sister. Hugs!! |
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xFromtheHeartx Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80Florida U.S. |
very nice poem, i like the ryming with it |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You two do find a harmony of kinship that cannot be bested. What a lovely write. Hugs to both. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very good! I enjoyed. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now you know I believe in fairies and angels  Just a lovely bit of poetry this was ladies. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Smooth as silk, this is...you two write so well together you could be related!  Huh? Oops...never mind  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A truly ENCHANTING NIGHT! The essence of two romantic hearts flows in this magical poem. Highly enjoyed! Love, Margherita |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A magical blending of talent Tinker and Chris. Very much enjoyed this duet. More please. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 My sister Chris and I thank you all so very much for your wonderful replies! ~Hugs & Luv to you all~ |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
The ladies were all clothed in splendor as they danced with gentle men. Beautiful I feel like I was there. :-) |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Fantastic write! The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Nancy Lee & I thank you both Steven and Chris. Hugs!! Nightshade/Chrislane |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know... a very fine friend gifted me with Goblin Market The tale of two sisters... and in some ways? This reminded me of that love. Thank you! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Flawless, seamless... absolutely beautiful! *S* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea - many thanks sister of our hearts. Ruth - how sweet of you to take the time to read and comment! Hugs! |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
such a delight to read, full of what I feel sometimes, and thanks for sharing this. Poetry can get you very far |
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Obsidian Snow Member
since 2005-08-24
Posts 88 |
I feel as if I were there watching, just by reading the words of your duet. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Chirs and NancyLee!!!!! This is a beautiful waltz....loved it! Made my heart merry! .......jo |
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