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Somewhere Within
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Somewhere Within |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Somewhere Within It was at night I dreamt a sight An amber glow, of amber light Lighting staves of waves of graves An enclave full of stone engraves And there within the pile of stones I heard the whisper of the bones A drum beat of a rank of roll That ate into my very soul I stooped to read each word I could Brushing mold each stone I stood And there in amber glow was fed The secrets of the gone and dead But quicksand grabbed onto my feet And I was drawn below the peat Down into the dew of dawn That clings and rings each cue of morn And though I rubbed my eyes to free The words were gone my mind to see And I was drawn back in estate The black of wait that is my fate For now too late my strut of prime I wait the glut and cut of time |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Seymour, your mastery of the craft is a sight to behold. I don't know if your dream was real or not but these chills running up my spine surely are. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
What a scarey dream. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sir Sonneteer, thy illustrious words hath shivered me timbers... Love & Peace of Mind, EA  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
you need some night time sleepy tea Sy! I'll fix you a brew for tonight and hopefully you'll sleep better. Hugs and smiles and tea, Nancy ~Autumn.. the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A drum beat of a rank of roll That ate into my very soul ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm sitting here rubbing my eyes at the wonder of your words and sharp mind. Your have a magnificent gift, Seymour!!! |
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xFromtheHeartx Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80Florida U.S. |
You writing is exalent! I look foward to reading more of your poetry! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
StevenS Enjoyed your reply, thank you. SmartChick Hope it didn't scare you.  Earth Angel Thank you sweet. Nancy, Thank you dear and hugs back. BluesSerenade You are the greatest. xFromtheHeartx, My humble thanks. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So close, but so far away.....but not really. Wonderful write, Sy. ...jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you for the read and bump. |
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