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Triskaidekaphobia
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2005-09-24 04:58 AM


This is made of sense

This is the end of flavour
The end of endless spite
Contradiction in a nose dive
It’s hard to pull it back.

This is the feel of faithless malice
Resting on the floor
The deadened dawn of consequence
Cold and stiff to touch

This doesn’t have to rhyme
Or even make much sense
It’s thought committed to the paper
Such as that can be

Pain is in the garden
Invited in for drinks
I’ll join them for laudanum
All for psyche’s sake

I’ll kill for a penny just for the fun
I’m doing what I shouldn’t
I’ve only just begun
To see what I could have done

This is the start of warfare
Waged inside my head
The reds are utterly routed
The blue’s are in retreat

These are the things I think
As I sit in my mind alone
The tattered banners flying
The battle so long ago

My chessboard, chequered scalp
I thought on many levels
And on the surface best
Shallow interception, myriad belief.

This has made no sense

"And the sun went down, and the stars came out far over the summer sea,
But never a moment ceased the fight of the one and the fifty-three."
      

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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
1 posted 2005-09-24 05:22 AM


It has made sense to me when knowing that the fog is always heavy before the dawn of enlightenment. Enjoyed the read!
Juju
Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
2 posted 2005-09-29 09:18 PM


yes life is just fighting your mind.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Obsidian Snow
Member
since 2005-08-24
Posts 88

3 posted 2005-09-30 10:27 AM


Could not have explained confusion and contempt with lack of understanding more clearly!

Did that make sense?  

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