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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-09-23 02:32 PM


A phone rings
and words turned
over and over
in my head

a shot rings out
so loudly it's heard

my first thoughts
where, when and who?
Dear daughter of mine
whatever you do..

call, just call..

while I say a prayer
Lord keep this family and child
in your care....

(breaking news at my daughters school
and I await a call..)

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

© Copyright 2005 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-09-23 03:19 PM


OMG Donna !!!!!

let us all know when you hear.....


Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2005-09-23 03:25 PM


April checked in she is fine....

I will keep you updated as I find out  more info.
I am so relieved that she called.. she doesnt know anything about it, and probably since this happened in the high school, they aren't releasing info yet as these kids are still minors and as not to upset the other students...

sigh....

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3 posted 2005-09-23 03:27 PM


Thank GOODNESS!....luv you...and squeeze her for me too.....
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4 posted 2005-09-23 03:36 PM


I'm afraid I will squeeze her and never want to let go!
Thanks L.  Talk about scarey!!

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5 posted 2005-09-23 03:39 PM


Oh, Donna .... I am so glad that your precious one is safe. Keep us posted please. I do hope no one was hurt. hugs, Chris
Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2005-09-23 04:15 PM


This one made me tense all over.  So glad she's okay.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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7 posted 2005-09-23 04:28 PM


Bella... i am so glad April is safe, thanks God!

to you both

such a terrible thing

M xx

~i want for myself your trembling~

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8 posted 2005-09-23 04:53 PM


I'm happy she's okay.

As for the poem, it scared me! I understand how that feels, even though it hasn't happened to me...YET!

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2005-09-23 06:55 PM


thank you, each.
as for me, I have had enough for the day  

so I will see all later.

God bless.....


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10 posted 2005-09-23 08:21 PM


GentlestOne~
Thanking the Good Lord that April is safe~
Please keep us advised as to the status of the child that was shot~
Prayers going up for that one too~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Sunshine
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11 posted 2005-09-23 08:48 PM


So much to fear
in today's time...

only yesterday,
it was kidnapping....

my mother's greatest fear.

How did we all
go so wrong?

SmartChick
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12 posted 2005-09-23 09:11 PM


What a sad thing to happen. I am glad your precious child is safe.
JamesMichael
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13 posted 2005-09-24 12:21 PM


Nice writing...James
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14 posted 2005-09-24 02:58 AM


Thank goodness she's okay, Donna.   ....jo
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