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Angelheart
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0 posted 2005-09-23 12:36 PM


    

Symphony’s I went to were so fun
They were so great
Letting the music flow Straight
Making the Rhythm sound
Through your heart
That is so special in that part

Sharing light
Sharing music
Sharing good times
That is the best thing to do
All the way around

My boyfriend and I took
Pictures by the Manatee’s
The most wonderful sight to see
The place was at Florida Times Union
That was one of the coolest parts to me


Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

© Copyright 2005 Laura - All Rights Reserved
sweetpoetess
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1 posted 2005-09-23 01:25 PM


This was so sweet. I loved it.

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

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2 posted 2005-09-23 04:55 PM


I like going to the Symphony, too..
Sharksbean
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3 posted 2005-09-26 10:03 AM


i liked it. especially the manatees
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2005-09-26 11:42 AM



Laura, I enjoyed your symphony of words!

"Sharing light
Sharing music
Sharing good times"

~ I'll say "Amen" to that! Let the good times roll!

Love & Light,
EA


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5 posted 2005-09-26 12:53 PM


I enjoyed reading this poem...it put us the readers right there with you...and made us use our imagiations to ''see'' what you were seeing...you didnt go to far over the top with words...you used the correct amount of words to stimulate our imaginary senses and bring your day alive...well done..and welcome to pip..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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