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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-09-23 08:39 AM

Stretching

Stretching the mystic of my mind
Peeling away the cloak of rind
I feel the breeze that strokes believe
And makes me dance the dance naive

And in this end I round the bend
To catch the tail of rainbows wend
Splashing like a child in bath
Raising havoc on the path

The colors scintillate the lie
Glittering gold as I splash by
Raising bubbles round my sight
Adding scenes to my delight

And as they pop and form anew
I see the heavens shining through
With butterflies beyond belief
And flowers forming reef on reef

It is a sheet I hoist in sail
To find the wind and catch a whale

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-09-23 08:43 AM

It is a sheet I hoist in sail
To find the wind and catch a whale

a whale of a life, isn't it sir...
Wonderful penning, with great admiration for life's bumps and grinds....

Happy Friday

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2005-09-23 09:10 AM

.... stretching in delight!

quote:
And in this end I round the bend
To catch the tail of rainbows wend
Splashing like a child in bath
Raising havoc on the path

Great! I love your stretching dance, dear Seymour.

And I really must say that your imagination is amazing.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2005-09-23 11:57 AM

Sy, those many bubbles popping....just wondering how many there are. I surely do like this "Stretching" and popping!!!

.....jo

xFromtheHeartx
Member

since 2005-09-24

Posts 80
Florida U.S.

4 posted 2005-09-24 09:36 PM

Very nice ryme!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2005-09-24 11:51 PM

It is a sheet I hoist in sail
To find the wind and catch a whale

I am just dying to tell you that you are full of wind - so there!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2005-09-25 10:50 AM

LeeJ
Yes it is, good morning sweet.

Margherita
Thank you dear.

iliana
Glad you enjoyed, thank you.

xFromtheHeartx
Thank you for the read.

Sharon,
Maybe I'll send a hurricane up there. LOL

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