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brian sites
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0 posted 09-23-2005 03:45 AM       View Profile for brian sites   Email brian sites   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for brian sites


a mirror is a rare event
a mirror spent in

            contemp
t              or         lation

knifecuts....where
the                       HELL
                did they come
                            from?

my face is memory smooooooooooooth
          is it not?
              not
             not
Not in this mere ROAR

                    exhaling: disgust!
it sounds like sails...
           sending
       this old
face
                    to some
                         ONE

who would appreciate

        IT

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Margherita
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1 posted 09-23-2005 06:06 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Intriguing mirror! Our faces reflect our story and our essence. And when we look beyond the “knifecuts” the true beauty surfaces easily … and ONE appreciates IT always …
Good job!
Love,
Margherita
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wind hitting taut sails
stretched and ready

and you
  smooth butter knife
never jagged
     or
  serrated
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3 posted 09-23-2005 04:52 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

I like the way this is all put together, it almost looks like a jumbled backwards image of yourself. I understand.
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my face is memory smooooooooooooth

oh how i love that line, you have no idea.

Thank you Brian

M

~i want for myself your trembling~

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5 posted 09-23-2005 07:36 PM       View Profile for StevenS   Email StevenS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for StevenS

Woah! I like your style Brian. Packs a whallop! I can hear those sails filling from here. I'm all to familar with that exhaling digust. Maybe it's a streak of vanity cause lookin back, I realize I was never that good lookin by anyway. :-)

Whats on the outside will never out weigh what lies within. I hope this thought let some of the air out of your sails. :-)
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6 posted 09-24-2005 11:45 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

it sounds like sails...
           sending
       this old
face
                    to some
                         ONE

who would appreciate

        IT

smilin atchoo
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and she do . . .
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My god/dess yes

your face is memory smooth--

didn't you feel my hand?

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um...

that wasn't my hand.



thwack

I love you bri
Susan Caldwell
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bump

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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damn!


it sounds like sails...
           sending
       this old
face
                    to some
                         ONE

who would appreciate

        IT

Incredible writing Brian.  Love the way you pulled this all together.

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

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I wanted it all and I've ended up with nothing.
 
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