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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2005-09-23 12:06 PM


Run away with it,

leap over the morning glories,

let it be everything
you ever imagined,

for soon enough
the summer romance
that kissed the sleeping branches,
will storm their brittle bones
with casts of ice,

though they carry it well,

knowing love is a contortionist;

rarely standing still
once you remember its face.


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iliana
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1 posted 2005-09-23 12:12 PM


"knowing love is a contortionist;
rarely remaining still
once you remember its face"

Michelle.....this is a wonderful write.  You are so good at stealing my imagination!   ....jo

Tim
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2 posted 2005-09-23 12:36 PM


enjoyed, nicely done...
brian sites
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3 posted 2005-09-23 03:50 AM


cool Ink
Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2005-09-23 04:41 AM


Dear Michele, inked Goddess, you have my applause for this fantastic piece of poetry!

This is worth more than one read, putting it into my library …

Love,
Margherita

Kaoru
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5 posted 2005-09-23 04:45 PM


though they carry it well,

knowing love is a contortionist;
rarely remaining still
once you remember its face.

wow....woah...and awesome..

Dark Angel
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6 posted 2005-09-23 05:45 PM


nowing love is a contortionist;
rarely remaining still
once you remember its face.


Yup...totally AWESOME!

a

m xx

~i want for myself your trembling~

StevenS
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7 posted 2005-09-23 06:09 PM


May we all remember. So beautiful a face it is. Cheers and Bravo!
Enchantress
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8 posted 2005-09-23 06:38 PM


Wonderful Michele!!
Very much enjoyed as always!
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn.. the year's last, loveliest smile.~

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
9 posted 2005-09-24 03:10 AM


leap over the morning glories,

let it be everything
you ever imagined,

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

That leap of faith doesn't guarantee we will come away without any injuries.
Sheesh, reality may not be all it's cracked up to be, but at least it's the real deal~

Excellent poem, Michele~

Honeybunch
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10 posted 2005-09-24 05:13 AM


"knowing love is a contortionist;
rarely remaining still
once you remember its face"

I'm no exception to the others in my appreciation of these words.  Well said!

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2005-09-24 02:47 PM


Michele, there is something very special and unique in the way you express your thoughts and feelings. I always read your poems more than once, that is why I have saved so many of them! ~ and this one is no exception! .... off it goes to my special library!

Love & Light,
Linda

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12 posted 2005-09-24 11:57 PM


Stunning work Michelle.  Sure like "short poems" that paint me pictures like this.
xFromtheHeartx
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13 posted 2005-09-25 12:00 PM


very very good poem, i look foward for more of your writing!


littlewing
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14 posted 2005-09-26 05:43 AM


let it be everything
you ever imagined,


yes'm . . . I do know.

bklynboy
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15 posted 2005-09-26 07:54 AM


ran with it and it wasnt bad
garysgirl
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16 posted 2005-09-27 08:34 PM


Run away with it,

leap over the morning glories,

let it be everything
you ever imagined,


Beautiful writing as always, sweet lady.
Good to see you, Michele!!
Hugs,
Ethel

Angelheart
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Jacksonville,FL USA
17 posted 2005-09-27 10:03 PM


yes this has a special emotion to it. thanks for sharing..

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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