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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2005-09-22 06:54 PM



Hello Sir,

You are the Lord they say
who can produce a miracle,
each and every day
I am just a woman,
producing nothing but love
for friends I've met
in rhyming words
through the internet
But some of them I came to know
real close as you might say
My question is, if you're the Lord
could you produce a miracle
perhaps, dear Sir...today?
They are your greatest fans you see
but they are in distress
They need your help
and maybe more
'Cause Rita will create a mess
Rita is a lady too
at least, that's what they say
and she is hitting hard on friends
later on this very day
So here I am, I'm begging you
keep them safe and sound
If you're as good as they all say
then keep them to the ground
Because dear Sir, my greatest wish
is to see them all once more
To feel their arms in tender hugs
to watch them laugh out loud
To hear their words in beautiful rhyme
You are the Lord they're saying proud
who can produce a miracle
Get on with it, dear Sir, it's time!



I wrote this last year, when 'Francis' was near to hit Florida, but I feel it's on it's place for 'Rita' too, hitting Texas and it sure would've been for that malicious lady 'Katrina'. My heart will be with all people in the danger zone.
I can't even imagine what a hurricane feels like

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

© Copyright 2005 Titia Geertman - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-09-22 10:37 PM


Well done Titia. May the Lord be watching over all of those in harm's way.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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2 posted 2005-09-22 10:38 PM


Amen
Angelheart
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3 posted 2005-09-22 11:23 PM


one word here too lol   "Amen"   thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-09-23 11:55 PM


Nice writing...James
iliana
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5 posted 2005-09-24 03:00 AM


Titia, your precious prayers are working, at least for so many in Houston.  Thank you so very much.  I'm joining your prayers for all those around me.   .....jo
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6 posted 2005-09-24 01:10 PM


OurSweetTitia~
You are of big heart my friend~

Keeping all in prayerful thought, we are~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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7 posted 2005-09-24 02:13 PM


Titia, you are such a precious poetess! I join you in saying every plaintif, prayerful word!

Hugs with love,
Linda

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8 posted 2005-09-24 11:56 PM


Atta girl!  You give his your message - he will hear ya.  Take care you a Mom.
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