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sim0riah
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0 posted 2005-09-22 05:31 PM



As the day comes to an end
I find myself wondering where I stand
I know the time is now I just don't know where or how
Should I run for a place that may not exist
Or hold out for what, just is
Is it being safe, fighting temptation
Or is a tempting taste a wonderous embrace

I sometimes feel my life has been written
and the pages all seem full
But now I feel like lifes spinning
Down Alice's endless Rabbit hole

So what to do, What to do
Should I risk of losing it all
what seems safe in my eyes
Or should I take a bite
from the tree of life
Do you think It'd be right

Even though I've been lost in your eyes
Felt a warm chill when you touched me so
My indesicion of these tempting thoughts
Doesn't mean this isn't how I feel

When you feel lost I'll find you
When your about to fall I"ll hold you
When your eyes are full of tears
My darlin I'll dry them
I'll do these for you
Because your life Is my destiny

I want to hold you when your cold
Kiss you when you awaken
Give you my thoughts to do as you wish
Give you the passion of firey bliss

Just do one thing and I'm yours
Stay true to yourself, Live as you are
Let my love enflame you
Because your life is my destiny



Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

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just out of reach
1 posted 2005-09-22 11:00 PM


Sounds like someone is quite smitten here.   Enjoyed the write. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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2 posted 2005-09-22 11:16 PM


very good .. thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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