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Hiding in the Dark
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Hiding in the Dark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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winter moves across the porch like a lover stuck to my tongue with a pervasive growth disorder red flags, a breakthrough, moving cheeky as daylight crashed with words by the hats you wear i may be quit ho-hum, but i’m pulling off the formica table that was screwed down to a microphone owned by a little boy hiding in a corner, with calloused fingers and a pattern of opportunism in material form mainstreaming live videos like rumba lessons with pale shoes behind the backdrop of summer bees snooping into attitudes as if his own ceased to view night fields owns us…where we read about those hills and the watchman nodding one may believe your serious but zoom in on that ripped screen we all possess our vices… yes, even you! so to the secular myth of those who wish to be birds…they are just that white birds with song rising light with unlimited cheeks far beyond, pulling all secrets like a hurricane hanging cars while surf fishing in the dark the nightmares strain to see footprints in the sand… If it were not so…then why did you strain to hang your light bulb? what’s that noise did you burst a blood vessel trying to defend your reasons? consenting adults doesn’t give anyone the right to orchestrate a persona… you were a class act so inflated while sitting outside my home listening in on my telephone… If you look for something hard enough your bound to find it…certainly causing one to believe, you never trusted yourself… i still cannot believe the hot air balloon you bought waiting to be revealed you played chess with my passport... the one you stole standing there watching me at the airport and yeah, I tried to clean up the spill with recycled paper towels...but for what my soul & mind went thru it was an even trade [This message has been edited by LeeJ (09-22-2005 03:15 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Nothing is an even trade. LOL Enjoyed |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
o my......... im kind of speechless you do have a way to bring it all home this one hasnt a prayer against your mighty pen well done poetrygal |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
what’s that noise did you burst a blood vessel trying to defend your reasons? ~*~ SMACK! right upside the head! Excellent work, Lee  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
LeeJ - I may not know where I started from or where I'm going to but I sure did enjoy this meander. "behind the backdrop of summer bees snooping into attitudes" - Had to smile at this because - hey, isn't that what women do or is it just me that perceives truth from attitude? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your language is always greatly captivating and this write makes it clear, that no one can hide in the dark for you, because you detect all the elusions well before they disappear … your strength is felt and I express my admiration. Love, Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"and yeah, I tried to clean up the spill with recycled paper towels...but for what my soul & mind went thru it was an even trade" Library clicked! ....jo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You always amaze me with your perspective. Thank you!  |
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