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Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-09-22 12:52 PM

Trust I should of
hand in you but
what else could
I do. people hurt
me on a daily
basics

I killed anything we
had when I lied
and went away
"oh why did I change so suddenly
why couldent I just let it be,
why couldent I just let things
riddeeee but this pain this
hurt inside impales me so much
it makes my very soul die

You were the one that never lied
you also were the one the that made
me cry,two wrongs dident make a right
but all I did was engult myself in
anger and put up a fight.

"Ohhh why did I change so suddenly
why don't i just cut my wrist and
black out my heart and run to you
in my dreams where they ought to be"
You were hurting to I just wanted to
help you but ohh why did I have to
press on why coulden't I just let
it be why did I have to care so much
just to feel your touch.

Take all your pain and instill it on me
I want to be your cross that you bare

Sing to me the sweet lullby of the forgotten
as my heart grows hallow with this numb pain

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

1 posted 2005-09-26 11:17 AM

this was very heartbreaking

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-09-26 11:39 AM

Foxy One ~

This line aches especially "Take all your pain and instill it on me
I want to be your cross that you bare"

~ Be careful what you ask for! You just might get it!

EA

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

3 posted 2005-09-26 02:03 PM

thanks guys

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

crimson tear
Member

since 2003-06-07

Posts 76
Massachusetts

4 posted 2005-09-27 03:34 AM

you said some things that i have felt before. good write.
-shane

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

5 posted 2005-09-27 02:30 PM

thanks

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

6 posted 2005-09-28 03:44 PM

sad but good. thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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