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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2005-09-21 10:26 PM



Someone To Care
~ By Sue ~

If I could go back to those times
when our life together was fine
there would be no hesitation
I'd be there in no time at all
to hold you once again
Maybe I would even admit
that I really did need you
just not for the reasons
you wanted me to
You thought you had me
where you wanted me to be
DEPENDANT ON YOU
You should know by now
I can make it on my own
True it is often a struggle
but, I never give up
For as long as it takes
I will continue trying
to plant my feet firmly
on this old ground
Then maybe, just maybe
we can try once again
Then again, I may find
someone else
Someone, I can count on
to always be there
Someone, who will really care

9-21-05

© Copyright 2005 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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1 posted 2005-09-21 10:36 PM


And I hope you do find someone that you can count on.. thanks for the write.very nice

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-09-21 11:53 PM


nicely written, from a position of strength
HopeS
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3 posted 2005-09-22 03:14 AM


Keep gathering that strength my friend , you will find someone that you can always depend

Hope

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2005-09-22 03:32 AM


Life is strange in that sometimes the one who really cares isn't the one we care for.  Balance is the key to happiness.  
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2005-09-22 07:20 AM


Someone, I can count on
to always be there
Someone, who will really care

Me too, Sue...sorry I haven't been on much but I seem to be in demand to sub

something I am proud of but it is also very tiring~~ and you know how it is trying to also keep up a home alone.

hugs to you and I hope to catch up with you soon

M

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2005-09-22 08:42 AM


SweetSuzieQuesie~

'I never give up'

Now that's the attitude that you can take to the bank !!!!
Love you sweets~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

vandana
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7 posted 2005-09-22 11:09 AM


good read
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2005-09-22 12:07 PM


Smartest Chick ~

Sweet Sue, only a very special man is deserving of someone as special as you!

Sending you a very loving hug and give one to yourself as well!





Linda

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