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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-09-21 01:58 PM



My eyes black
my tears grow
cold,my heart
takes a final
beating for the
hell of it

They do it and
they like it
con be betray me
take my goodness
in and exhale out
the evil that you
instill upon me.

My face grows pale
my blue eyes go grey
and my soul fades
away for awhile

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2005-09-21 02:03 PM


Very vivid emotions, rendered with skill!

... and your words brought back a memory buried in the past, never forgotten though!

... my soul fades away for a while This is great! You know you are strong.

Love,
Margherita

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2005-09-21 02:07 PM


thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
3 posted 2005-09-21 04:37 PM


wow...   thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
4 posted 2005-09-21 07:39 PM


your welcome hehe

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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