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Big bang |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * * * Big bang Our touch a big bang giving birth to incandescent new suns in the very core of our hearts vision losing focus through the heat of our gaze lips searching colliding orbits entwined fingers generating brainstorms red lights and shooting stars one touch a big bang a soul dance to the never ending song of love … of Love. *** |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ooooh, this is what it means when they say "his touch was electric" or "I saw stars when we kissed."  Perfect Margherita. Loved this! Chris |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
talk about a high energy moment |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
I feel the love in this piece. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
what a marvelous description and poem.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How lovely..you described it so well. Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn.. the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Yes...perfect. And beautiful! Love, Eric |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
Very pretty picture.. Thanks for sharing this. Poetry can get you very far |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh my! This is a delight, Margherita!!!! Library clicked.  ....jo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
spontaneous combustion it's kismet !!!!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One touch from your pen is always a pleasurable read... |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
OOH thats Hot! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
is this what it means when they say, "I saw fireworks" just after a kiss. Smiling Sei Bella Margherita Mxx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Your write describes exactly how I feel these days, most cool write, Steve. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Margherita, now that is my kinda touchin'! lol Loveya! Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear poet friends for telling me you enjoyed my "big bang"! And I am happy to know that you too know what I am talking about! Have a beautiful Sunday all! Love, Margherita |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Margherita, When I read your title, I knew your poem would strike my fancy. There surely are lots of suns out there, aren't there? Always a bang of regeneration! A pleasure to read... miscellanea |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"a soul dance to the never ending song of love …" A song of local love, and sung so well.. Yet I see more here, a universal love, and a planning for it from the first sound of lifes explosian.. enjoyed ________ ____ice ><> |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much dear Misc and dear Ford ... it's a synchronicity, dear Ford, that I should post my little senryu about human rights and lacking love, just in the moment you saw "more" between the lines of "Big bang"... Love and Light. Margherita |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
ooohh wow! great write, very passionate and intense...loved it. ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Only new year, keeping resolutions and love can create this feeling. This is a spontaneously uplifting write. Good job. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
So nicely presented in this whole write....Loved the images.... Eric |
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loved_and_redeemed Junior Member
since 2006-01-03
Posts 22BC, Canada |
Wonderfully written and inspiring Love can really bring out the best in people. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
what fusion! I simply do not read you often enough, and oh it is my loss... |
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