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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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To See To see a scene of forty green And even green that’s in-between Is a miracle of miracle? The melting of a mind equivocal It shines upon a path of go A path of dreams of needles sew A shroud that shades the heat of fire The forty winks of minds attire It is to touch upon the ground A non exist to turn around A hale and hearty sort of cry A hale and hearty sort of sigh A magic carpet sort of ride In and out a forest pride A walk upon a rainbows road A kiss that turns a prince from toad I love the fantasy of preen Within the forty shades of green |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And you know I love all things green... I'd say you wrote this for me... but then I know better... so I'll just enjoy the view, and the smile that comes from only you! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
I saw it all with you Seymour, another great write which was enjoyed, thank you. Sincerely Rick |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"A magic carpet sort of ride In and out a forest pride A walk upon a rainbows road A kiss that turns a prince from toad I love the fantasy of preen Within the forty shades of green" Poetry doesn't get much more beautiful than this Sy! A wonderful piece to awaken my senses this sunny September morn. ~Hugs & Smiles...and a little green tea, Nancy~ ~Autumn.. the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Without you there wouldn't be a green.  Rick, Thank you, my friend. Nancy, A bit of green tea would hit the spot.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: How absolutely beautiful, dear Seymour! To be able to see, like you do, is a precious gift! Love, Margherita |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour, you're amazing!! Thankyou for blessing us each and every morning. hugs, Chris  Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita You are my precious gift. Chris, Thank you dear. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
thanks for that magic carpet...enjoyed this very much |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you sweety. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sheesh I saw a golf course! LOL, must be wishful thinking! Hang on tight down there you guys won't you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Different sights for different lights. Thank you sweety. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
that was a good one. thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Now this is comforting thought!  ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Angelheart iliana, Thank you and hugs back. |
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