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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-09-21 12:14 PM



I'm finally real here in this mess
Where are you?
Brainless,
And the wise give thought to their ways

Load up on pretty plastic machinery
Pretending its real
Start fires
Smoke flies

I just don't know
Change the world
Make it just the way I like it
Seasonal pounding powder, powder, powder
Tuck and roll
Run like Hell...

Can I trust you?
Will you tell, or can you keep a secret?
(whisper)..."i'm starting a fire tonight..."
Dangerous overtones, screaming "arrhhh!!!!"

I give you the truth
A flat level piece of solid you can stand on
You're cursing God, yourself, me, the trees, birds...
We can walk a little farther
And touch a little more...
Then we can dance until death do us part

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2005-09-21 09:18 AM


Craig

indeed nice to see you posting in open....there is a lot within this, and between the lines....enjoyed these words, and thoughts....

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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2 posted 2005-09-21 12:01 PM


Very deceptive

Good words

Bodger

Angelheart
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Jacksonville,FL USA
3 posted 2005-09-21 04:56 PM


well interesting.
thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

yv
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4 posted 2005-09-21 06:23 PM


Oh my...that was emotionally wrought!  I just want to say...I aspire to be a poet!  That's all!!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx
5 posted 2005-09-22 12:38 PM


Greeneyes- Yeah, I like posting in Open, I posted in dark for so long cause, I used to be a really dark person, but the Bible changed me.

Bodger-Yeah, kinda like different parts of life.

Angelheart- Thank you.  How are the hurricanes in Florida?  We're about to get a big one!

yv- Wow, thats a compliment.  Thanks


Thank you for your compliments.  You guys rock.
-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

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