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Luna's Rose... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Where, so long ago, I first espied her being, dark oblivion fled before moon’s glow falling from on high, revealing a rose most sweet, radiant in midnight’s fleeing, O’ how her splendor shone, much as did Luna’s orb in autumnal sky, Beauty! Beauty! No more need be said of long ago as time has passed As she lives and breathes as still does the moon in a September firmament, Luna shining down upon earthly realm chasing shadows cast Into dark oblivion, to compete, but fail in radiance, as compared to a rose resplendent. Beauty! Beauty, Aye, no more need be said. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
No more need be said indeed. Very poignant, and sweet. Kuddos!  *Meredith I'm not your type, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Beauty! Beauty, Aye, no more need be said." Exactly....very full of beauty is this lovely verse! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nicely done  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is deep yearning in this. Beautifully done! Love, Margherita |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
A lot of love went into this piece. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
youve said a lot , moons, roses, what a lovely beginning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And now, take a bow. I miss my roses... guess what's going into the new garden next year!!! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely write. Much enjoyed. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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