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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-09-20 01:46 PM



What a waste—of time
The rest has been

Here
I die—

A new born baby

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Margherita
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1 posted 2005-09-20 01:57 PM


Ok, I learned that a Jisei No Ku is a death poem one writes before dying.

And with this knowledge I can appreciate your words.

Death indeed imo is a new birth.

Love,
Margherita

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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2 posted 2005-09-20 02:06 PM


Margherita,

Yah, I was reading a Zen page
and just fell in with a bad crowd.

Thanks for reading.

John


Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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3 posted 2007-04-25 05:44 PM


newborn can't write poems. the significance.

never into that.

good poem as always.

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