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0 posted 2005-09-19 01:37 PM





hold me in your heart
your face still invades my dreams
love me with each beat

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Chris Barker
September 2005
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© Copyright 2005 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-09-19 01:40 PM


and you shall be loved   ..  this was good... thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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2 posted 2005-09-19 01:54 PM


Lovely penning, Chris!   ....jo
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3 posted 2005-09-19 02:42 PM


Thankyou so much laura &  jo.   Hugs!
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4 posted 2005-09-19 03:14 PM


Dear Chris, who could resist?

This is beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

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5 posted 2005-09-19 03:15 PM


your face still invades my dreams''''


~~~

oh WOW Chris....what a beautiful way to say it....

love the new pic too...

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There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
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6 posted 2005-09-19 03:32 PM


Margherita & Lauren - thankyou both for stopping by! Hugs!
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7 posted 2005-09-19 03:56 PM


Excellent Chris...Love this one!
AND your new pic too!
~Hugs, Love and miss ya, Teed~

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

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8 posted 2005-09-19 04:46 PM


Thanks Teed !! Luv Ya !!
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9 posted 2005-09-19 08:02 PM


Chris, you do these so well. I love it. This is just beautiful.
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10 posted 2005-09-19 08:11 PM


Awww....thankyou Sue. Hugs!
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11 posted 2005-09-20 08:15 AM


The ache of need.

Very touching Chris.  


Oh!! and a new picture!!! Very cute!!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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12 posted 2005-09-20 09:07 AM


Hello Susan!
Thankyou for the lovely comments. Hugs

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13 posted 2005-09-21 05:15 PM


Nice...James
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you have away with these short ones making them always come out great

Time brings change and change comes with time

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15 posted 2005-09-21 10:05 PM


James - thankyou for reading & commenting.

Snowflake - what a nice comment! Thankyou!

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You know who
you remind me of?
A heartbeat, for sure...

Ann Margret! No kidding!

As for the poem?

All Chris!

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17 posted 2005-09-21 10:55 PM


Karilea - you've got to get stronger glasses my dear friend....lol. But, thankyou anyway. I am so glad you like this little offering. hugs, Chrislane
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18 posted 2005-09-22 09:04 AM


You infuse your writing with thoughts that touch us all.  You're a pleasure to read.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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19 posted 2005-09-22 09:10 AM


Chris, your new photo is lovely ~ and there is a strong family resemblance to your enchanting sister!

..."love me with each beat" ~ How romantic! Flowers


Linda

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20 posted 2005-09-22 11:06 AM


good read
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21 posted 2005-09-22 11:56 AM


Ken, Linda  & vandana - thankyou all so much.
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