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Full Moon on the Rise
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Full Moon on the Rise |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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 photo by my first internet friend Paul Crouch "Pablo" http://www.pablos4corners.com/ "The thread of our life would be dark, Heaven knows! if it were not with friendship and love intertwin'd." Thomas Moore ~~*~~ Sun rose, a ball of fire pressing the coming day thoughts to a destination unknown. Absence of presence in the quiet morn faded, as challenges mounted and a smile reached its level of contentment. Sun set as the Full Moon rose like a quartz crystal ball. Imperfections of the day to carry me into nightshadow arms. I ache in those places unseen and fear the uncrowded and abandonment, when anchored in night's cover. To close the distance... To be held up by words... and reach tomorrow's dance... the matter of me~~ MM "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Nothing wrong with the matter of you.  |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
the other night as I arrived home from a long day, I was gifted by the moons glow from behind a nearby hill .... ... it looked as if the horizon was consumed by fire .... it was as beautiful as your own words here ... excellent!! CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
This is very good.. Thanks for sharing....  Poetry can get you very far |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Oh maureen, i love this, as i know, you are the "moonchild" beautiful picture to set the mood for this.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ Absolutely stunning is this~ Your thoughts are as beautiful as that gorgeous photo~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very significant observations in this beautiful piece of poetry, dear Maureen. I love it. Love, Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"To close the distance... To be held up by words... and reach tomorrow's dance... the matter of me~~" Lovely one, Maureen! ....jo |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Stunning words that have me feeling the vision you weave...I love it...**big hugs** |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A very good poem, a very fitting picture, and a lead in quote from one of the worlds great poets... But these lines, in my mind, make it better than a very good poem, in fact, they make it an excellent one... "Absence of presence in the quiet morn faded..." I love "Absence of presence" times, they give the mind a chance to rest... enjoyed ------------ice ><> |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Maureen. Hello my friend. Your writing just keeps getting more awesome each time I read it !!! This one is library bound. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
One day at a time... you do it well. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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