Honeybunch
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2005-09-19
04:45 AM
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A Shame The Mirror to Whisper Of Years but Compassion Of Sorts What You Show Me Through The Looking Glass when I’m Stirring The Water To Meet This Reflection of Fitting Imperfections.
I Used To Carry Melancholia A Few Years Back because I’m A Bird Who Cannot Fly when Moon Smiles and When Trust Is Gone (twice). What Matters Not? The Man or Nature at the Ending of Autumn when My Comeuppance the Night Knowledge of Change?
Sunday Last The Stinky Water Chant of Words, Lia Lia Lia – Bsa Bsa Bsa, not Apollo’s Song From Our Hearts On Warm September Days and this Hyper Text Markup Language - best It Goes Unwritten in the Here And Now.
I’ve Asked for Tunes Of More when Sharing Intimate Desires with Mountain Spirits up North but What Can We Do when Spandex won’t Hold you, my Dragonfly? The Exodus of Mike From The North To Be like a Full Moon Thump-a-Rump and this from the Fortune Teller Attuned In Feelings when Out Of Focus. Vento Va! She’s a World Weary and Self Absorbed Dreamer or a Pagan Cloud Gazing!
Dance Me, Yes…Dance Me...if you won’t Marry Me By The Lake and give me Happiness In This Life but when Sun in Shroud, A Spanking said Chief Quanah Parker if you won’t Walk With Her under September Sunsets.
If You Have Ever Thought At All of Petty Party Poopers who say, “Oh, Forget of Love And Lust And Women’s Eyes” you’ll stay Fenced In Willful Protection Awaiting Love forever.
On Far And Distant Knoll Midnitesun Cooks By Remote Control the Dim Bones of your 2nd Love until Golden and the Echoes of this Poetic Potpourri to Shades Of Ash while you Sleep. Is There Something On Your Mind or in Your Eyes to see only Dolphins When I’m Near You On A Stop Along The Road To Samhaim? Lotionata! No Moonlight Magic for you!
Ok, My First Attempt At A Sonnet on a Stupid Computer when the Moon Rose in ’72 not a Write And Reply Of Southern Whispered or a Haiku but when Everything under a Full Moon is Raining Tears, You Won’t Forget Me!
Helen / 19 September 2005
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Paul Wilson
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2005-09-19
06:55 AM
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Honeybunch...This had too be extremely hard, using all of these titles and having them make some sort of since. Very good job. Thanks for sharing...Paul~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul
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ice
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2005-09-19
07:00 AM
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Excellent, Honey-B enjoyed muchly....
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LeeJ
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2005-09-19
07:48 AM
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a magnificant read, brilliant with a wide ranged forehead...incredible and much to absorb, especially enjoyed....
I’ve Asked for Tunes Of More when Sharing Intimate Desires with Mountain Spirits up North but What Can We Do when Spandex won’t Hold you, my Dragonfly? The Exodus of Mike From The North To Be like a Full Moon Thump-a-Rump and this from the Fortune Teller Attuned In Feelings when Out Of Focus. Vento Va! She’s a World Weary and Self Absorbed Dreamer or a Pagan Cloud Gazing!
Whoa.....I see great understanding in this...
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Honeybunch
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2005-09-19
08:51 AM
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Thank you Paul, ice, and LeeJ. This is fun to do when one is numb and sometimes it weaves itself into what I cannot say. Glad you enjoyed.
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Marge Tindal
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2005-09-19
09:52 AM
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Helen~ MUCH for this one !! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))><
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Gentle Spirit
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2005-09-19
10:00 AM
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Delightful writing Helen!
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Martie
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2005-09-19
10:54 AM
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Helen
Amazed at this...so well done!!
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nakdthoughts
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2005-09-19
11:15 AM
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very much enjoyed~~
M
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
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2005-09-19
11:56 AM
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Helen~This is excellent!!! I so much admire a person with a talent like this. It sure cannot be an easy project of putting all these titles together.. and having it make sense to boot! Brava and hugs~NancyI wait now at the lake or walking by the bay I wait and listen or put a seashell to my ear and it all comes back the wind's soft murmur..and you.
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iliana
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2005-09-19
12:58 PM
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I always love to read these stories from titles, Helen. You pay tribute to all the wonderful poets here and you shine doing it! .....jo
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Angelheart
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2005-09-19
01:26 PM
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that is sooo cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I would of gotten fustrated to look through all these poems. very Impressive! Thanks for sharing....Poetry can get you very far -Laura
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Larry C
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2005-09-19
01:31 PM
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Honey, I was thrilled to make the list and these things are always lots of fun. Nicely done. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.
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Honeybunch
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2005-09-19
01:39 PM
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Thank you all for reading and responding. It's actually very easy to do - just print titles and write. Sometimes it may only make sense to me though so I'm pleased that this one makes sense to others. Thanks again!
Helen
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Margherita
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2005-09-19
03:47 PM
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You are so good at this! Really amazing, it has rhythm and depth!
Love, Margherita
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Earth Angel
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2005-09-19
05:44 PM
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Helen, thank you for this bunch of honey! I thoroughly enjoy reading these poems that you assemble by using the titles of poems. You do it masterfully! ~ and with wit and charm! It's amazing how you manage to put them coherently togethe and have them make sense! Totally amazing!
This was brill! Good going! What a fun read! Your sense of humour shone through this piece!
Bunches of hugs, Linda
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Larry C
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2005-09-19
05:49 PM
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Helen, A bunch of us have done it before and always find it fun. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.
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Susan Caldwell
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2005-09-20
08:22 AM
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I would never attempt but do so love to read them!!"too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~
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garysgirl
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2005-09-21
12:16 PM
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I love these, Honeybunch. I've tried to do a few, but ususally from my love poems. I don't think I've ever done one from the whole groups poems.
Thanks for sharing this with us. I really enjoyed reading it. Hugs, Ethel
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Greeneyes
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2005-09-21
12:43 PM
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Honeybunch--- thanks for including me... you did a wonderful job with all of these...
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Midnitesun
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2005-09-21
01:33 AM
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Helen, this is such a fun read! You even made me laugh again at my own titles. this really is a cool way to link so many thoughts and people together.
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HopeS
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2005-09-21
02:37 AM
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You threaded those titles into an excellntly piece , thanks I noticed a couple of mine in there. I have only ever attempted doing something like this with song titles before
Hope
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Honeybunch
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2005-09-21
04:05 AM
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My thanks to everyone for reading and commenting. Very much appreciated. I too find it amazing how titles can fit so well into a story.
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