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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-09-19 03:45 AM



My fingers shaking

My body aching the


Feeling subsides
then the sickness
enters again

What was it that
it happened this
time without a reason
again with no rhyme

The generic sayings
of cynical carbon copy
hypocritical nonsense
exudes out of their
mouths time and time
again like puppets

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2005 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-09-19 08:21 AM


what a rivoting read...I felt like I needed more...
Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2005-09-19 02:54 PM


thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2005-09-21 05:10 PM


Enjoyed...James
Angelheart
Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
4 posted 2005-09-21 10:05 PM


this is good.. thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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