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exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-09-18 11:45 PM

so this is what it feels like
to not know how to feel

this is what it feels like
to know exactly who i am
but not how to act it

it seems
i'm the best version of myself
when i'm near you
and that's not even saying much
i still play with my food
and snort when i laugh
i still pace when i have nothing to do
and read when people are talking to me

but

you make these seem like miracles
you make me seem better
you make me like myself
through your beautiful eyes
you make me see who i could be
and who i am
all because you took the time
too see it yourself

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2005-09-19 12:24 PM

a beautiful write
   of a beautiful heart ...

   an excellent rendition of poetry's motion

    CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2005-09-21 12:02 PM

Nice one

Bodger

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

3 posted 2005-09-21 04:49 PM

this was very sweet.. one of my favorites of yours... thanks for sharing. that put somewhat of a smile on my face.. very heart feeling.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-09-21 05:26 PM

Its always nice to be appreciated...James

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2005-09-29 09:20 PM

Ohhh! I like that person,

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

6 posted 2005-09-29 11:15 PM

beautifully written from the heart and theres no better poetry than that

darkling
Member

since 2001-08-28

Posts 90
altered state of mind

7 posted 2005-09-29 11:18 PM

"So this is what it feels like
to not know how to feel." Perfect
Mmm. Thoughtful, and wonderful imagery/examples. I snort when I laugh too. I'm glad you found someone to appreciate you for who you are, and someone to make you feel that wonderfully confused.

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

8 posted 2005-10-01 04:18 PM

I would say that you are one of the clearest purist writers of words that i have read

You flow with a simplicity that understates your talent

You remind of someone who told me, break something from time to time otherwise they feel what you are achieving is 'too easy'

My second comment on this but one I wanted to make

Bodger

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