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eminor_angel
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0 posted 2005-09-18 06:15 PM


Why does love need to be pedantic?
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Angelheart
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1 posted 2005-09-18 06:22 PM


pedantic?  Whats that mean?  LOL I am such a blonde.  I am not good with certain words.. When I get what this words means. I could probably answer this.. til then thanks for sharing......

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Bodger
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2 posted 2005-09-19 08:50 PM


In possession you have

possession

In love

You have stupidy, nonsense

Mills and Boone

Very good words, good structure

Bodger

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3 posted 2005-09-20 12:03 PM


I LOVE this!

"I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real"
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Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2005-09-20 08:06 AM


pedantic love...

yes, often times because one is selfish.

Well done!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
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5 posted 2005-09-20 06:21 PM


LOL, never mind the visual imagery I got with this

well, it doesn't have to be pedantic. Love makes its own rules.

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