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Beki
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0 posted 2005-09-17 02:34 PM



below this moon
sweet scent of candlebreath
and you in my arms

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Angelheart
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1 posted 2005-09-17 03:01 PM


That is so sweet..  very Romantic.. thanks for sharing

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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-09-17 03:16 PM


I never thought of it that way before..
but yes, 'candlebreath'..lovely.
Beautifully said Beki.
Hugs~Nancy

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

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3 posted 2005-09-17 03:24 PM


Beki~
So very softly done~
Beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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