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What Matters Not
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What Matters Not |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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What Matters Not "A friend is the one who comes in when the whole world has gone out" ~~*~~ Sometimes you don't understand the sustaining of a feel the loss of emotions back, a hold of feelings real. The profile of your words, a Friday night alone. What might have been, behind these eyes those thoughts of tender sown. Selfishly, I run to you my burden's interlude. A gift of time, if only, then to soften saddened mood. The tears of yesterday attack to crystallize the dust, icing down the warmth of feel, a twist of an adjust. The evening of this life journeys on alone. What might have been lost now to eyes, as time itself has flown~~ M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
The flow of your poetry is always beautiful, M-lady. This is a perfect example of that.  .....jo |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
friends don't let friends matter not .... you always have a world right here. CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynterBliss~ You matter ... ain't nuttin' the matter with that~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
it might have, but who really knows unless it does? good thought provoking words |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
such a wonderful poem.. and yet so true... thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I understand how you feel. And, you do matter, my friend. Miss you, alot. Hope you are okay. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Maureen...Sad, tender and smooth as silk. You do have a special knack for writing this way. I hope all is well...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Maureen, this for me held great vision...simply said, I have learned there may be a price tag on some friendships, yet others, go forth fruitfully, benighn to any forgery, or selflessness...having the ability to smile on someone's accomplishment, need to travel further, sometimes without us... Well done |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear M, we would all call ourselves very lucky if we had just one person to call our friend, too often we are just alone, maybe not in company but in self, a friend brings out the person and the truth. This was a fantastic write, though sad, each time I read you, you get better. You have many friends here who love what you do, please keep it up, you can never become lonely with us all. Be well my friend and keep the pen writing. Sincerely Rick |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I appreciate all your responses...and you DO matter to me...it was just another lonely Friday night... I am sure there will be others~~  M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I thought I was the queen of lonely Friday nights??  right there with you."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
But then, you wrote and it became not so lonely, yes? .. for me, yes  Pepper |
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