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CalicoMemories
Junior Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 15
the wind in the trees

0 posted 2005-09-16 03:31 PM

I remember him in winter
mornings when I arise
the sky grey, the air cold
the whispers of years
gone by

you should say your
goodbyes now
nothing can touch or
change us back to
what we were

we could use the perfect
parting to remember
all the hours we held one another
all the loving words
when we were young

we could just continue
to be alive, like we were
the years we have left
before whatever happens,
happens

at the ritual moments
I'd show you,
you still belong to me
for the grace I allow
and the lessons of patience

September will bow
her head to the evening sky
spread her canvas evenly

giving way to the darkening
sky of winter

to leave us alone again
searching for the shore

I am one person.
I am a chorus of a thousand souls.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2005-09-16 03:38 PM

Welcome to Passions

I found many layers to this poem and I enjoyed the discovery, especially enjoyed the changing of seasons.

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

2 posted 2005-09-16 03:46 PM

this is real good.... Thanks for sharing....and welcome to passions~!

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

CalicoMemories
Junior Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 15
the wind in the trees

3 posted 2005-09-16 04:08 PM

Mysteria I thank you for the nice welcome

Angelheart thank you as well

cm

I am one person.
I am a chorus of a thousand souls.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2005-09-16 04:54 PM

Welcome to PIP, CalicoMemories!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-09-16 05:20 PM

Welcome to Passions...
What a wonderful write this is!
I'm going to be looking forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2005-09-16 06:41 PM

... could almost hear the years pass in your words,
          a most excellent feeling ...


        you seem to have many colours ... a thousand souls ...

         I hope to read more of the Calico in you!!

                    Welcome ....    CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

7 posted 2005-09-17 07:44 AM

CalicoMemories...Great poem. Welcome to Passions. I hope you stay awhile and share more of your beautiful poems with us.

I really like the name you decide too use, it reminds me of an antique store I once visited...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

8 posted 2005-09-17 09:09 AM

Welcome to passions, you will have a great time here, sharing your life and times as we will share ours with you, this was a very touching to life poem, sadness feeds us all and is the easiest thing to write of, have a great time and see you soon again.

Sincerely
Rick

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2005-09-17 10:05 AM

CalicoMemories~
You definitely touched a room in my heart, where I store special memories, with this one~

Welcome to PiP~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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