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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 09-16-2005 07:42 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Iíve Asked

Iíve asked the genie of my mind
To speak with me and help me find
The essence of her courts pursue
The spirit of her core to view

To hold her hand within the breeze
To stay the winds of twist and tease
To open up the door of goal
To be with her as soul to soul

And in my dreams of nightly quest
I swear by all to do my best
In place and fare and grace and care
To stay with her through foul and fair

To be with her in times to be
To sail with her this argosy
To act as one our will be done
As long as shines the sight of sun

All this I swear and pledge to you
The genie of my mind to do

© Copyright 2005 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Angelheart
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1 posted 09-16-2005 07:50 AM       View Profile for Angelheart   Email Angelheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angelheart

This is so wonderfully written..  Very poetic and very interesting ..  A good beginning with a good end.. thanks fors sharing..

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Margherita
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Eternity


2 posted 09-16-2005 07:57 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

quote:
To act as one our will be done
As long as shines the sight of sun

All this I swear and pledge to you
The genie of my mind to do



The genie of your poetic mind answers beautifully, no doubt, always.

Very dynamic rhythm to this!

Love and hugs.
Margherita
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3 posted 09-16-2005 09:02 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Morning Sy!
Sounds as though you have an enchanting
and very intelligent genie there.
Wonderful write this dull Friday morn in Ontario Canada..
You made it sunny for me, if only in my mind.
~Hugs, Smiles & a spot of tea, Nancy~

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 09-16-2005 09:48 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Good morning. Mr. T.!

The genie of your mind is one lucky genie!!!  I bet her hand is being offered to you right at this very moment and she will be ready and willing at your beck and call!

Female Entertainer 8

~ A match made in heaven, I'd say!

EA


Startime55
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5 posted 09-16-2005 11:39 AM       View Profile for Startime55   Email Startime55   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Startime55

I am so glad the genie of your mind weaves the magic that captures us heart and soul filling our lives with the special magic of you....Magnificent...**big hugs**
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 09-16-2005 12:15 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Angelheart
Thank you for reading and replying.

Margherita
Thank you sweety.

Nancy,
A sunny mind is good. Hugs

Earth Angel
That's good to know.

Startime55
A lovely reply, thank you.
Mysteria
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7 posted 09-16-2005 12:41 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Is it just me or am I the only one think this belongs in Adult You devil you!

Mornin Floridians
Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 09-16-2005 01:01 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos


Yep, Mysteria! It's just you (LOL)dear lady. This is obviously a tribute to Isabelle
Very beautiful
Liz
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just out of reach


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Another lovely write to sit back and smile softly at. Thankyou Seymour. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

scorpio
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10 posted 09-16-2005 02:21 PM       View Profile for scorpio   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for scorpio

Inspiring words Sy!!

believe in what your heart feels...

iliana
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11 posted 09-16-2005 02:24 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

What a wonderful pledge to the genie (I like that anaology) of your mind!  Enjoyed the read, Sy!   .....jo
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 09-16-2005 02:45 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

LOL Sharon, Sharon, thank you Elizabeth.
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 09-16-2005 02:49 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Chris,
You are a delight.

Thank you scorpio.

liana,
Enjoyed your reply.


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14 posted 10-06-2005 04:03 AM       View Profile for MGROVES   Email MGROVES   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MGROVES

you can sure keep a heart warm,a spirit bright,and a soul filled with joy
I thankyou sir

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 10-06-2005 07:36 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

MGROVES
It is I that thank you.
StevenS
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16 posted 10-06-2005 08:31 AM       View Profile for StevenS   Email StevenS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for StevenS

Seymore what a delight to the soul these writs you write. You never cease to amaze me!
Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 10-06-2005 08:54 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

StevenS
LOL these kind of comments I could read all day. Thank you
Obsidian Snow
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I envy this person of whom you speak.

Truly wonderful words.
Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 10-06-2005 10:32 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Obsidian Snow
Your snow sprinkels white.
MGROVES
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20 posted 07-03-2007 02:23 PM       View Profile for MGROVES   Email MGROVES   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MGROVES

you are precious~ you are special
I am so glad that I found this~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Artic Wind
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21 posted 10-28-2007 07:08 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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