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iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

0 posted 2005-09-16 12:31 PM

There are poems I will not write,
Words I will not speak,
     secrets sheltered from a storm,
     moments playing hide and seek.

There are tunes I won’t compose,
Songs I will not sing.
The night will shield the melody
     from blooming forth in spring.

I have loved you more than words.
There is no way to say this thing.
You inspired a song and theme
     that only angel choirs could sing.

There are poems I cannot write,
Words I cannot speak.

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2005-09-16 12:43 PM

very nice read

i cant taste the poison that im drinking your death is in disguise

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2005-09-16 01:00 AM

There are tunes I won’t compose,
Songs I will not sing.
The night will shield the melody
from blooming forth in spring.

I have loved you more than words.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You wrote of those tender moments with so much feeling.
The song never really ends, it just fades away.

Very beautiful poetry, illiana~

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2005-09-16 01:03 AM

but they are so ever present ....

      unwritten but, so known to heart.

       an excellent write!!

  CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2005-09-16 01:16 AM

Lovely write, jo, but one just never knows what one is capable of given the right motivation and inspiration. Sometimes it only comes from within but thoughts are things so I've been told. Write the poems and speak the words because ... first there was the word.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-09-16 06:31 AM

Though,
not to make an attempt
to speak what can't be said
   would leave you with
   the unimagined
      rambling 'round your head.

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

6 posted 2005-09-16 08:04 AM

----iliana----
This is a good write.. But be free to speak your heart.. It can get you far in life.. Very Good with this!!! Thanks for sharing

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2005-09-16 09:56 AM

Good morning, girlfriend. I do believe that I can read between those unwritten lines. Powerfully scribed emotions here! They pack a punch to one's solar plexus.

The words seemed to spill right from your guts and onto the blue page.

Sending you a big, warm, sisterly hug,
Linda xo

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2005-09-16 10:49 AM

someone special inspired much of what I write , before than I kept feelings hidden from view

Hope

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

9 posted 2005-09-16 11:27 AM

Yet in the not telling powerful feelings are expressed....Stunning....**big hugs**

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

10 posted 2005-09-16 09:37 PM

I know the feeling, Jo. For those who are absolutely the closest to me, I can not find words to adequately express. I love the simplicity of this
and the smooth flow.

miscellanea

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

11 posted 2005-09-16 09:39 PM

Any poem that remains unwritten by you is a loss to the world. This is stunning
Liz

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2005-09-16 10:13 PM

Exquisite writing Jo!
Beautiful..a keeper!
Hugs~Nancy

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

13 posted 2005-09-16 10:41 PM

nice

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

14 posted 2005-09-16 11:40 PM

A wonderful read, iliana, and so very true. Some things can simply not be translated into words without loss. Those we simply whisper to ourselves.....very nice writing