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Amen
Junior Member
since 2005-09-13
Posts 28
Brooklyn, New York

0 posted 2005-09-15 07:11 PM



Look into my eyes.
Tell me why you love me so.
As I gaze fondly.

© Copyright 2005 Amen Alhadi - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2005-09-15 07:13 PM


Welcome to Passions.
This is a lovely first post.
ThisDiamond

Larry C
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Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
2 posted 2005-09-15 07:14 PM


A fine first post. Hope the answer isn't "just because". Welcome to Passions. Watch your email somebody will have a surprise for you soon, I'm sure. Hope you like it here half as much as I have.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

ctowen
Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
3 posted 2005-09-15 07:15 PM


"AAAAAAAMEN!!!"

           Welcome to passions
                      look forward to reading more!


    CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ...  CTOwen/05

              

Amen
Junior Member
since 2005-09-13
Posts 28
Brooklyn, New York
4 posted 2005-09-15 07:18 PM


No need for the welcomes...Although they are nice...

I have been around for years, but needed a new name. My old name was forged back in my late teen years, and frankly, it reeked of adolescence.

Good to be back though!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2005-09-15 07:53 PM


Nice...James
Nightshade
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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
6 posted 2005-09-15 07:54 PM


Welcome Back whoever you are or might have been. Enjoyed the write. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Larry C
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Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
7 posted 2005-09-15 08:16 PM


Ah a mystery person. We like intrigue.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
8 posted 2005-09-15 08:28 PM


Welcome back to Passions Amen...
I shall send you the official greeting
even though you have been here before.
Please check your email.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

Angelheart
Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
9 posted 2005-09-15 08:51 PM


Welcome Back to Passions!!!!  Its good to have you here...  This is a good first post   Hope you continue to like it here...

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
10 posted 2005-09-16 06:50 AM


A change of name -
indicating growth...

Welcome to Passions, Amen!


Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
11 posted 2005-09-16 03:39 PM


Welcome back!!!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

CalicoMemories
Junior Member
since 2004-08-31
Posts 15
the wind in the trees
12 posted 2005-09-16 04:06 PM


How nice to see love, through your eyes.  
cm

I am one person.
I am a chorus of a thousand souls.

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
13 posted 2005-09-16 04:52 PM


Welcome to Passions, Amen!
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