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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-09-15 05:17 PM


This poem is dedicated to my 2nd love (Philip).He almost stole my heart but then things happened. Please enjoy and dont cry that nothing worked out then I will start.Very emotional poem here:

The things that were said and done
were meant for you
The things that I care about
is mostly of you

I knew when I first saw you
I knew you were the one
With that beautiful heart
That wonderful mind
I knew you were for this heart of mine

When I looked into your eyes
I started to blush
I started to think of the positive things
I then turned you
I wanted to shout out "you who"?

I thought about those times we saw and met
I knew you were the one
When I looked into your eyes
I knew at that bare second that you were the one
That strengthened up my life


I wanted to tell you the truth
When I first saw and met you
But then I began to sigh
And then I just wanted to cry
I will never forget the times I have with you
You made me feel that special connection
That I will never be afraid to mention

You are that special someone
That is meant to be
That is meant for me
I am the luckiest girl alive
To have you with me
Forever until I die


I love you truly
You are meant to be
That special person
That is meant to be for me
Forever do you see?

I know who to come to
When I am feeling sad
When I start thinking of you
I will become glad

It has been a month with philip
I can say it has so far been a happy time
I am never nervious around him
My world is surrounded by him

Philip is nice
Philip is sweet
he is the kind of person I will always need
his lovely kisses I miss alot
yet I have not given up in this very thought
He loves me for me
and not just for the looks
that makes my heart spin
I love him for him
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Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

© Copyright 2005 Laura - All Rights Reserved
sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
Posts 428
Florida
1 posted 2005-09-15 08:55 PM


I know how this feels. But it only lasted 4 or 5 months with a guy named Greg. Anyways, awesome poem.

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
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Florida
2 posted 2005-09-16 01:17 PM


I am bumping this up. This is a good poem.

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia
3 posted 2005-09-16 01:34 PM


A special love will always remain in mind and heart

Hope

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just out of reach
4 posted 2005-09-16 01:54 PM


Philip sounds like a wonderful guy, and if it doesn't come to "love" .... you might just have a great friend in him. You don't lose either way. hugs, Chris
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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5 posted 2005-09-16 02:22 PM


I remember these feelings.  Nightshade said it best.   ....jo
Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
6 posted 2005-09-16 03:17 PM


Well that is exactly where we are right now, which are friends .. We had a big argument and split up and now we've called everything a truce... One thing I will never forget is the way he treated me when we were together .. I miss him so much ..  but life moves on ..... thanks for the delightful responses i really appreciate this

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

CalicoMemories
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since 2004-08-31
Posts 15
the wind in the trees
7 posted 2005-09-16 04:02 PM


If it is meant to be, it will be  enjoyed your words, and hope you find happiness
cm

I am one person.
I am a chorus of a thousand souls.

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