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SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
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0 posted 2005-09-15 05:13 PM



Here
In between the seconds
    where stars in my heart
     welcome darkness
And the fire in your touch
     are welcomed
     burning ambers

Now
Stay with me
    feel all there is
In the animal of being
   never to regret the moment…

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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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Jacksonville,FL USA
1 posted 2005-09-15 05:21 PM


Very very good.. this was good.. thanks for sharing

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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Jacksonville,FL USA
2 posted 2005-09-15 05:22 PM


Very very good.. this was good.. thanks for sharing

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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Jacksonville,FL USA
3 posted 2005-09-15 05:23 PM


Very very good.. this was good.. thanks for sharing

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
4 posted 2005-09-15 05:25 PM


so sorry to have gotten ya responses so many times... aol is being slow today ...  hope you understand.. thanks

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
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5 posted 2005-09-15 05:38 PM


Thank you
Thank you
Thank you
Thank you

I appreciate your replies even if they are dups.

You are an angelheart...

SG

CalicoMemories
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since 2004-08-31
Posts 15
the wind in the trees
6 posted 2005-09-16 03:46 PM


In between the seconds
    where stars in my heart
     welcome darkness
And the fire in your touch
     are welcomed
     burning ambers

I really enjoyed this.  The above stanza especially  Nicely put SimplyGold

I am one person.
I am a chorus of a thousand souls.

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