Open Poetry #36 |
The Last Long Line...(JuJu's vulnerability challenge) |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Standing in line, At the pearly gates By the look of this line I've got quite a wait. St Peter's interviews, Short but sweet, Is patience a virtue? Gotta stay upbeat. Mother Teresea, In front of me, We're now at the door, My heart's at my knees. Now you know how I am Just'a lowly Toerag, Ain't been no angel But not terribly bad? Then St. Peter says To Teresea the Nun: "You couldda' done more, Before you were done. Now being the Toerag You all know I've been If he said that to the "Mother" He ain't lettin' me in!!! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
LOL...I guess we will all have to put in a good word for you....The smiles you put on our faces should be enough to get you in without question....A delight to read as always...You sure put a smile on my face...I hope you don't mind that I am printing it off to share with people I know...**big hugs** |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Oh my toe. Your so silly. -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
at least you got to get in line!!! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Tell you what? I will send up a little prayer for you, that will sure shock him! Cute and yes, vulnerable as heck! To see real beauty - look with your heart. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Toe, Thank goodness for grace! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I gottatellya, I think ya shouldda thanked yer lucky stars to have even made to the pearly gates! But then again, heaven could use some of that wit and charm of yours. EA P.S. Please accept my belated condolences. I did not know that you had passed on. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Aw, Toe... what a perfect answer for the challenge! *S* But you're not to worry... Those pearly gates will open wide! If you hesitate at the door Angels will escort you inside To meet with those who've gone before. What a reunion that will be Forever happiness begun... And if you ask "All this for me?" The Lord will answer "Toe, well done!" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very good thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
LMBO This is a good one. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Toe, It is soo great to see you again and to smile at your words! Miss you round here fella |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
i liked that last part LMAO |
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