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Open Poetry #36

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MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2005-09-15 10:02 AM

We can change nothing in the past.
Leave it there.
Let the dust entomb all and smoother the hatred of the past.
The beginning of the rest of our live starts today.
Why suffer for a mistake made 2000 years ago.
Open up your arms and the rest will follow.
Messenger with flight soar in the azure skies,
Prevent any more tearful goodbyes.
Reunite friend and foe,
Untie the noose of our lasso.
Greet everyone we meet with warmth,
Stoke the fires burning through the night,
Keeping darkness out of sight.

Obsidian Snow
Member

since 2005-08-24

Posts 88

1 posted 2005-09-15 11:08 AM

Can't change the past but can certainly learn from it and try to do better.

lol...love your message in the critique.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2005-09-15 12:03 PM

Bravo!!! The lessons of our past can make teach us much about love...Well done...*big hugs*

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

3 posted 2005-09-16 08:19 AM

----MERCURY----
This is very well writen.. Thanks for sharing this ... Godbless ya

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-09-16 10:26 AM

Mercury, this surely is a message from the gods!

It's been awhile! Good to read you again!

Warm, wecome-back hug,
EA

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