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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-09-15 08:15 AM


Hold

Hold the hand rail of my arm
Still the quivers of your qualm
Walk with me in fields of green
Stay with me enjoy the scene

Split the colors of the white
See the rainbow in the light
Change the clouds to golden hue
Share my kingdom in the blue

Be a butterfly today
Sip the nectar of their way
Fly upon the wind and sea
And you will always be with me

Hold the hand rail of my arm
Still the quivers of your qualm
Walk with me in fields of green
Stay with me enjoy the scene

And in the interim of this life
Dance with me the fifer’s fife



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Enchantress
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1 posted 2005-09-15 09:08 AM


"Be a butterfly today
Sip the nectar of their way
Fly upon the wind and sea
And you will always be with me

Hold the hand rail of my arm
Still the quivers of your qualm
Walk with me in fields of green
Stay with me enjoy the scene

And in the interim of this life
Dance with me the fifer’s fife"

Dear Seymour..
Do you have any idea how beautiful this is!??
What a wonderful piece to start my day!
I would walk or dance with you anywhere.

Have a great day!
~Hugs & Smiles..'your little tea leaf'~

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

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2 posted 2005-09-15 09:57 AM


I agree with my sister Enchantress on  this gorgeous write. Uplifting and charming ... just like you dear Seymour. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-09-15 10:22 AM


A special good morning to you, Sir T!!! Hummingbird

I plan to "Hold" onto this exquisite piece of writing for a long time. It is going to a good home where it will be among friends!~ the previous poems of yours that I have saved! Girl 5

Have a glorious day, dear glorious poet!

EA

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4 posted 2005-09-15 10:36 AM


Be a butterfly today
Sip the nectar of their way
Fly upon the wind and sea
And you will always be with me''''


~~~

thinking there will be a lot of butterflies fluttering your way....

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
~~**~~

Obsidian Snow
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5 posted 2005-09-15 11:06 AM


No better way to profess one's love and devotion!  
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2005-09-15 11:19 AM


Mancy,
My little tea leaf,

Chris,
The hand rail of my arm delights in your charm.

Earth Angel
To my personal angel. :ssqueeze:

Greeneyes,
THey are loved and welcome. Hugs

Obsidian,
Thank you so much.

Startime55
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7 posted 2005-09-15 12:01 PM


Absolutely enchanting....I took flight over fields of green and tasted of the sweet nectar of your words...I love it...**big hugs**

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2005-09-15 12:31 PM


Startime55
And that is ample reward, thank you.

inot2B
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9 posted 2005-09-17 11:36 AM


I will always "Hold" your writings close for they are what gets me through my day.
You have a way that touches my soul.

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2005-09-17 01:14 PM


inot2B
Thank you so much.

Angelheart
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11 posted 2005-09-18 09:47 PM


very nice write .. and creativeness.. thanks for sharing.........

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2005-09-18 09:53 PM


Angelheart
Thank you for the read and reply.

SmartChick
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13 posted 2005-09-18 10:19 PM


What a beautiful poem, Sy. I always enjoy reading them.
iliana
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14 posted 2005-09-19 12:30 PM


"Hold the hand rail of my arm
Still the quivers of your qualm
Walk with me in fields of green
Stay with me enjoy the scene

And in the interim of this life
Dance with me the fifer’s fife"

Right there beside you, Sy....thanks for the arm.  Wonderful reading.   ....jo

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
15 posted 2005-09-19 08:26 AM


Smart,
Your joy is my joy.

iliana
Thank you for taking it.

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